Based on this (short!) essay, if you were a scholarship essay reader, would you give me a grant?

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Oh, and any ideas for a good title? Thanks in advance for your reading, not very long. MedlinePlus -------------------- MedlinePlus I was supposed to answer the questions: MedlinePlus one. Why are you applying for this scholarship? MedlinePlus b. What accomplishments make him deserving of financial assistance? MedlinePlus c. What are your career goals? MedlinePlus ------------ MedlinePlus Ok here it is: MedlinePlus MedlinePlus My dream is to be an ABA (Applied Behavior Analysis) therapist who specializes in children with autism. Autistic children can be some of the sweetest kids you never know, but unfortunately, its true capabilities are usually buried under the disease, so they need therapy to help unleash their potential. I chose to pursue this career not for salary or because autism is the fastest growing disability in development in the United States, but for a more personal reason: I have three cousins ​​with autism. MedlinePlus I spent the summer of 2007 working as a nanny for two of them, trying to raise money for college. It was very interesting to see how their lives changed by autism that next summer, I found a job at an ABA therapy for autistic children. I loved it and gave me a desperately needed financial opportunity, the beginning of my third year in college (fall 2009) is when my parents will withdraw all financial support from me and fully expected to live on my own. MedlinePlus I am currently a sophomore in the second semester, majoring in Psychology with hopes of eventually becoming an ABA therapist. In the little time I have left, while I'm still financially secure, I am looking for the most effective ways to earn money as possible, I have to be able to pay for school while still having enough money to live on half of come fall. In order to be able to secure scholarships, I turn my attention almost exclusively to my notes and doing well in my classes - and is certainly paying off: last semester I gained an average of 3.93 and a member the Phi Beta Kappa national honor society. MedlinePlus I am still very concerned, however, because if it is I have to choose between buying food or finish college, I will have no choice but to leave school. I'm working hard to earn money as possible, but I need all the help they can financially, or who may have to make the painful decision to leave school (and essentially my dream job) so I can afford the necessities Basic. If I can finish school, I can not find work as ABA therapist, and bring hope to many autistic children as possible, not only my cousin, but all of them. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus ------------- MedlinePlus Thank you very much for reading this!
Answer1marelynAnswered at 2012-10-13 09:59:11
Based on your answer , you sound like you are a highly motivated , determined student , intellectual does very well in school. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus You have a great base from which to lead , but his points are not very clear in his essay . Remember that you are not the only application , and if the trial is not clearly points , then it makes reading more difficult work ... and could cost you the opportunity to be awarded . MedlinePlus MedlinePlus I'd like to write the essay to answer questions clearly . Also, think about how to delete the information re: the possibility of leaving the school , because it questions his determination to be efficient with the prize money (why give it to you if you only plan to quit smoking ? ) MedlinePlus . MedlinePlus I'm in a doctoral psychology program now , so I know along the way may seem . It seems he has a lot of potential , so for the sake of people with autism , please stop. MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Good luck with your financial aid application !
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