What should I name my book, and can you help me critique it?

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The story is about a woman who lives up there , she was getting her double Masters in Psychology and Sociology . ( * Background * When I was little , I had a pet capuchin monkey , and was his best friend . Died only recently . END * OF * Background ) She is raped during spring break in Florida . She returned to Kansas where he lives , and learns that she is pregnant . She decides to keep the baby . When the baby is born , gets another pet capuchin monkey . She nods her degree in both fields , and raising her two " children." She teaches her daughter and monkey sign language at an early age . Both collect in language and come to their own words . The two best friends are left to history, separated only by the school . When the daughter decides to get a boyfriend , she introduces her boyfriend for the first monkey in place of the mother . How could I do better ? I'm not going to make dramatic changes , only minor changes . Also, what should I call it ?
Answer1lbAnswered at 2012-10-10 21:32:38
You should probably look a little more in reality according monkeys as pets . Even as small capuchin monkeys can be really dangerous and regularly attack their owners , disfiguring or disabling . It's kind of a myth that people can raise them to be their "best friends " or " surrogate babies ." They are taken from their mothers as babies to be sold as pets , and because they are wild and domesticated animals , living in a human home is very confusing and harmful to them . Once you begin to approach sexual maturity (5 or 6 years old) , their natural instincts kick in and begin to assert themselves with their jaws , sharp teeth and sharp nails poswerful . No matter how " close " the owner and the monkey are - this is what occurs naturally . The thing is that capuchins can live up to 50 years , so once they start to grow and get scared , that's the norm to be imprisoned in cages or have their teeth extracted or being high by long decades remaining her life. MedlinePlus If you want to write a story based on any kind of reality you need to pay a little more attention to these facts ! MedlinePlus Good Luck .
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