So what do you think of my college essay?

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1. How have you taken advantage of the educational opportunities they have had to prepare for college ? MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Throughout my years in high school my main focus has been to excel in my studies , to participate in activities that help me in understanding my classes , and take advantage of the optional subjects offered at my school help determine the future of my career plans . To reach my full potential in my classes and exams , I participated in during tutoring to improve my grades in math , which I must admit is one of my weakest subjects . The additional protection , however , greatly helped me in developing my skills in math , which is now reflected in my test scores . This year , my government class gave me the opportunity to work at the polls in elections for governor . Gladly seized the opportunity , and at the end of the day , left with a greater understanding of how our state government . The opportunity I have maxed been my choice of electives - namely , psychology and anatomy . Through them , I realized that my main interest is in the people and science subjects undoubtedly continue in the future.
Answer1MeiaAnswered at 2012-10-15 07:59:12
Overall, it seems pretty good , but I would suggest reworking your prayers introduction, which are a kind little plain and boring , and after a template . Try to write something new , so yours does not sound like all the other trials .
Answer2ElmeAnswered at 2012-10-20 08:49:20
How long the trial has to be? MedlinePlus MedlinePlus I'd like to write the definitive introduction . likely to focus more on optional or rewrite in a way that emphasizes its elective MedlinePlus MedlinePlus I'm a little fuzzy on the tutoring thing - he did tutor students ( and if so , please provide your reasoning behind tackle a difficult topic ) or was under the tutelage of being ? ( and if so , then add what you have it - other than what is reflected in the test scores ) MedlinePlus MedlinePlus and also talk more about psychology and anatomy . What did you get from him , why he decided to follow in the future , revelatory experiences or something ... 're excited to get more into it in college or - . why MedlinePlus MedlinePlus Yes , these are only suggestions , so its up to you to use : ]
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